A Little Piece Of Heaven Tab

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First off, yes, i know that my guitar two is played on a piano or a violin
or whatnot, but what the hell, I tabbed it anyway.

I'm working on the rest of the song and will post it when I'm done :D

So...

Intro 1 (00:00-00:12(ish))
Guitar 1 plays nothing for this

Guitar 2
e|-----------------------------------------------|
B|--3--5/6--5--3--2--3-5-3-----------------------|
G|--------------------------2--3---2---0--2-3-2--|
D|-----------------------------------------------|
A|-----------------------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------------------------|

e|-----------------------------------------------|
B|--2-3--6--5--3--2--3-5-3-----------------------|
G|--------------------------2--3---2---0---------|
D|---------------------------------------3-2-----|
A|-----------------------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------------------------|

Pre-Verse (00:12-00:25)
Guitar 1
e|-------------------------------------|
B|-------------------------------------|
G|-------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------|
A|--00000000000000000000000000000000---|
D|--00000000000000000000000000000000---|
pm  ................................

e|-------------------------------------|
B|-------------------------------------|
G|-------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------|
A|--33333333333333333333333333333333---|
D|--33333333333333333333333333333333---|
pm  ................................

Guitar 2
e|-------------------------------------|
B|---------10---11--10-----------------|
G|------------------------10---9---7---|
D|-------------------------------------|
A|-------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------|

e|-------------------------------------|
B|---------13---14--13-----------------|
G|-----------------------13---12---10--|
D|-------------------------------------|
A|-------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------|

Then it goes into the verse, which I'm working on
Anyway, please rate, and be nice
I'm a UG noob and this is my first tab :P
Any comments/suggestions/improvements would be very welcome, as long as you're not a 
jerk about it
Thanks :)