At The Gallows End Tab

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SONG: "AT THE GALLOWS END" - CANDLEMASS.

Hi guys,
Below the riff I found on the site and then how I think it goes, let me know
if in your
opinion sounds better!
C U, thanks for paying attention.


RIFF D
|-----------------------------|-------------------------------|
|-----------------------------|-------------------------------|
|-----------------------------|-------------------------------|
|--------------------245-2-------|------------3-3------------------|
|-245--245--245--245-------32-|---------------1-1-2----------------|
|----------------------------------|--0-2-3-0-----0----------------|



RIFF D(mine version)

|------------------------------------|-------------------------------|
|------------------------------------|-------------------------------|
|------------------------------------|-------------------------------|
|-------------------------245--1----|------------3-3------------------|
|-245--134--245--134-------------32-|------------1-1--2----------------|
|-------------------------------------|--0-2-3-0------0----------------|



Dark greetings from FEANOR81!