Dons Bong Is Gone Tab

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This is an old song from a Slave Pit Single. Balsac said it's the true story of
what happened to Sleazy's bong.

All strings tuned down one half step.

|--------------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------------------|
|-----8-----8-8~------8-8----------------6-6~------6-6---------|
|-------6-6-------6-6-----6-6h8-6--4-4-4-------4-4-----4-4h6-4-|


                                  1st time          Rest of song
|--------------------------------|-----------------|------------------|
|--------------------------------|-----------------|------------------|
|--------------------------------|-----------------|------------------|
|--------------------------------|-----------------|------------------|
|-------4-4~------4-4------------|-----------8~-6~-|--------8~---6~---|
|-2-2-2-------2-2-----2-2h4-2-1~-|-888~~--8~-------|--8~--------------|
                                                     (Don's bong is...)

Legend

~ | Hold note

I'll try to figure out the middle section...the tape (mp3 of tape) quality isn't really 
on that...

This is my first (posted) tab and I'd like some feedback on it...
-DH
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