Carrion Bass Tab

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This is the bass tab for the song Carrion by Parkway Drive
The start follows the guitar mainly on the B string. This is my first tab so plz rate me 
how it is. I think everything is correct.
Bass comes in after Winston screams "Carrion".
~ = let it ring

INTRO/CHORUS (Distorted part)
E |-----------------------------------------|
B |-----------------------------------------|x2
F#|-----------------------------------------|
B |-3~-------0-------7~-------5-------------|

VERSE 1
E |-------|---------------------------------|
B |-------|---------------------------------|x3
F#|-------|-8-----7---8-5-----8---5---------|
B |-0-0-0-|--0-0---0-0---0-0----0---0-10----|

VERSE 2
E |----------------------------|
B |----------------------------|x4
F#|-8-----8---8-5--------------|
B |---0-0---0------0-000--8----|

E |---------------------------------|
B |---------------------------------|x4
F#|-8-----7---8-5-----8---5---------|
B |--0-0---0-0---0-0----0---0-10----|

CHORUS 1
E |-----------------------------------------|
B |-----------------------------------------|x2
F#|-----------------------------------------|
B |-3~-------0-------7~-------5-------------|

VERSE 3
E |----------------------------|
B |----------------------------|x4
F#|-8-----8---8-5--------------|
B |---0-0---0------0-000--8----|

CHORUS 2
E |-----------------------------------------|
B |-----------------------------------------|x4
F#|-----------------------------------------|
B |-3~-------0~-------7~-------5~-----------|

VERSE 4
E |-----------------------------------------|
B |-----------------------------------------|x4
F#|-----------------------------------------|
B |-10200-----10200-----10200-----10200-----|

CHORUS 3
E |----------|-----------------------------------------|
B |----------|-----------------------------------------|
F#|----------|-----------------------------------------|
B |7~------5~|-3~-------0-------7~-------5-------------|

ENDING
E |-----------------------------------------|
B |-----------------------------------------|x5
F#|-----------------------------------------|
B |-0-545----0-757----0-878----0-757--------|