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you kept ending the main riff with0000its way to deep, i would suggest this 00on two bottom strings, or add a harmonic.
in the song, the screechy bit at the end of the riff is:e---B-4-G-4-D-4-A---E--- But apart from that it seems good. And also, well done on the drum part :D