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The rhythm is off. The ending chord in bar 3 (and so on) is too long. It should just extend by an 8th note in bar 4, not a dotted 8th note. Listen to the drums and you should hear it. The kick is following the riff.
Thanks for the feedback. I understand what you're saying, but if that is the case, then what does that mean to the slide-in note on beat three and the following notes in measure four? I can't seem to figure out a way to alter it without it sounding more incorrect.
Is it song in Drop C#?