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This is 99.9% perfect. The ONLY thing that is wrong here is how you end those big string sustains. Instead of ending them with a whole note, they need to be ended with a half note followed by a half note rest as they cut out just before the next measure to give the bass portion that "punch" when starting the melody over again. Listen very carefully to that portion of the song and you will no doubt agree.