Girls Tab

Well, this is my first tab so don't be too harsh on me if this is wrong.
STANDARD TUNING
Anyway, this is played throughout the whole song  with some pauses in between. So here it goes...
 
E-----------|-12-12-------12-12---11-|    -12-------|     pause...then
B---12-14-12|-------12-12-------12---|    ----------|
G-----------|------------------------|X3------------|
D-----------|------------------------|    ----------|
A-----------|------------------------|    ----------|
E-----------|------------------------|    ----------|
 
GIRLS...
E---12-12-------12-12------|------------------------| over and over
B---------12-12-------12-13|-14-14-------14-14----12|
G--------------------------|-------13-13-------13---|
D--------------------------|------------------------|
A--------------------------|------------------------|
E--------------------------|------------------------|
 
 
That's basically it, sounds right to me.
 
please comment. thanx ; )
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