Atlas Solo Tab

I tabbed this from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t6xpGRGVuCk
He does it right I think.
It's my first tab btw :)
 
Correct version:
e|-16-16-16-16-16-14-----------------------|
B|-------------------17-16-12/14-17-16-17\-|
G|-----------------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------------------|
A|-----------------------------------------|
E|-----------------------------------------|
 
e|-16-16-16-16-16-18-14-16-----------------|
B|-------------------------12/14-17-16-17\-|
G|-----------------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------------------|
A|-----------------------------------------|
E|-----------------------------------------|
 
e|-16-16-16-16-16-14-----------------------|-------------------------------|
B|-------------------17-16-12/14-16-14-16--|-12p11-12p11-12-14-12p11-12-14-|
G|-----------------------------------------|-------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------------------|-------------------------------|
A|-----------------------------------------|-------------------------------|
E|-----------------------------------------|-------------------------------|
 
Last piece can be done this way too:
e|-------------------------|
B|-12p11-12-14-12p11-12-14-|
G|-------------------------|
D|-------------------------|
A|-------------------------|
E|-------------------------|
 
/  slide up
\  slide down
h  hammer on
p  pull of
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