Amateur Bass

Hello there, this is my first tab and 4 me it´s allrigt but any
correction/coments/whatever you wanna make on it, go ahead, feel free yo email me.
 
G |------0-------m-------m-------||
D |---0---2~-----u-------u-------||   (this is played during the verses
A |--2--2~-------t---5---t---3---||  near the ending the guitar comes in)
E |--------------e---5---e---3---||
 
You gotta listen to the song cos since its my 1st tab i wasn´t sure how 2 express the
timing correctly. Hope y'all enjoy it
 
Kreed.-
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