Teenage Politics Bass

i doubt this is right since i dont play bass but i tryed to come up w/ an easier
way to play it so our band could cover it cuz our bass player sucks. this is what i got:
 
Intro:
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-1-1--5-5-4-4------5-5-4-4--3-3--5-5-4-4------5-5-4-4--
--------------3--3-----------------------1--1----------
 
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--1-1--5-5-4-4--------5-5-4-4--3-3--5-5-4-4------5-4-5-7-
----------------3--3-----------------------1--1----------
 
verse
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--1----------3----------1----------3----------
--------3----------1----------3----------1----
 
Other thing
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--3--3--3--3-----------------3--3--3--3----------------
-----------------1--1--1--1----------------1--1--1--1--
 
verse
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--1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-----------------------3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-----------------------
-----------------------3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-----------------------1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1--
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