September Tab

I believe the song is dropped half-a-step down, Eb Ab Db Gb Bb Eb.
 
This is my first tab. I have put in a few requests for the song,
but I finally decided to sit down with it and give my interpretation
as a base-outline. I'm sorry that I don't have the chords or the
lead-guitar. This is the rhythm that repeats throughout most of
the song. If someone could build off of my tab, submit comments
or corrections, it would be greatly appreciated.
 
I figure I would get this out there so we could try to play
this awesome song. Thank you, and good luck!
 
Intro/verse 1&2:
 
eb|-------------------------------------------0-----------------------|
Bb|------1-------1-------1----------1-------1---1---------1-------1---|
Gb|----0---0---0---0---0---0---0--0---0---0---------0---0---0---0---0-|
Db|--------------------------0--------------------0-------------------|
Ab|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
Eb|--3-------2-------0-----------2------0-------------3-------2-------|
 
 
eb|-------0---------------0-----|
Bb|-----1---1---1------1------1-|
Gb|---0-------0------0------0---|
Db|----------------0------------|
Ab|-----------------------------|
Eb|-3---------------------------|
 
 
Its a little fuzzy at the end, but I think I got the basics. Again, feedback and
are most welcome.
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